ThaDj's Reviews

[BirdDog]

It sure is a change..

..From the usual submissions. Your style reminds me of David Firth's. I don't know why, but I liked it.

[MGS: Flash Collab DISC 02]

Well...

This is a piece of art.

[Excessive Happiness]

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I'll jump straight to the area where you could improve, since it seems like that's what you're after:
x Smoother animation - I.E. eye blinks
x Even though the sketchy style made this submission more original, I think it would be better clean.
x A better story, if any even existed.
x At points where characters were speaking, even though it probably wouldn't be what they said/sang, it would be neat if it synced to the song
x General improvement with detail in the background

A good submission overall - Good luck with further projects :)

gaaaah responds:

Yeah I gotta work with inbetween frames -_-lll. And yes I shall try to ink and make it cleaner. I am also trying to learn to be more creative with the background, as you can see from the animation that the b/g was shitty.... And they weren't singing, they were actually talking to the blue haired girl, although I\m starting to think I shouldn't have done that cause people might mistake it for singing the song.

And thank you for the in depth critique :) Cheers

[Getaway Scene]

Awesome

This is the first time I've seen something this original in a dress-up. The art was neat, but the way the menu worked annoyed me. A few things that could be done to improve the game would be; more "cloth", making the sound disabling button stop the sound effects as well and a simpler menu.

4/5 & 7/10 from me

[HD Naruto Hentai Gallary]

Meh..

I never understood why all these hentai galleries belong on Newgrounds, 4/10 to you for joking with it.

(Improvement for if it had been a real gallery)
More images
Better quality images
Warn people before screaming at them

Heil responds:

these are high definition images!!1

[Red and Black Guitar]

Could become something bigger

The concept is similar to the "Rock band" game (Non-Flash), and has it's potential - Try adding more instruments and more control over the instruments.
If you have the skills and time you could turn it into something like "SC Guitar Maniac Dx 3"

[No mercy [full version]]

Whuhu

Just What I need for my new (I was bored in 10 min.) flash :D !

Metalized responds:

hehe,yeah glad u liked it! :D \m/