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[Excessive Happiness]

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I'll jump straight to the area where you could improve, since it seems like that's what you're after:
x Smoother animation - I.E. eye blinks
x Even though the sketchy style made this submission more original, I think it would be better clean.
x A better story, if any even existed.
x At points where characters were speaking, even though it probably wouldn't be what they said/sang, it would be neat if it synced to the song
x General improvement with detail in the background

A good submission overall - Good luck with further projects :)

gaaaah responds:

Yeah I gotta work with inbetween frames -_-lll. And yes I shall try to ink and make it cleaner. I am also trying to learn to be more creative with the background, as you can see from the animation that the b/g was shitty.... And they weren't singing, they were actually talking to the blue haired girl, although I\m starting to think I shouldn't have done that cause people might mistake it for singing the song.

And thank you for the in depth critique :) Cheers

[Spongebob SquareDUB!]

Hello.

I'm Chris Hansen with Dateline NBC, and we're doing a story on adults who try to meet kids online for sex.. Naah I'm messing with you..

Your voice matches spongebob's almost perfectly, and it also sounded much like Patrick. It was overall funny and creative - Keep 'em comin'

DAGamesOfficial responds:

lol I kinda figured, i was playing along. thanx man. yeah I kinda wanted to get the voices just right. expect more soon :P

[Fight through the sky]

Potential

It was quite good, but it was as if two different animators had been working on this. At times the animation was neat, other times stiff.

Anyway, I liked your color-and song choice, but work with the animation a bit, and try to use a thinner outline.

PancakeJesus responds:

yes next im working on shading during action

[Duck Luck Episode #4]

Ducky :D

Hey Snubby :D............................ .............................. ......................... Read MSN messenge btw :P
About the Flash:
As all the other episodes (that I have seen with pleasure (Lolzor):

D) I do think you oneself have stood for the whole (the Even voices?)
The graphics:

A little..

fat black things around the different people?

They would look better a little more thinly : )

Sounds:

The voices are very identical: Get some voice artists :D Everything else:

Super :D (Im to bored to write something for each... Type.. Of... Peanut../..Thing)

Snubby responds:

Thanks =D The black things around the chars are to separate them from the bg. The bg has no black in it, and the chars have big outlines; it's supposed to make it look more cartoony and crisp.

The voices I feel like I should continue my gimmick of doing all the voices and maybe improve my skills so that you won't know it's all me instead of choosing a different path.

Thanks for the review!

[TANKMEN: Target Practice]

Nizzle

Nice made :D

fadedshadow responds:

thanks

[Elimination 3 Preview]

!!!

Can't wait :) Looks fantastic

Splurgle responds:

Thanks for the 6/10.

[Historia Bizarra]

Piiiiift!!

Fantastic !!! Mabye it's were i littel bit weird but still cool !! I hope to see more like this from you.

Eustaquio-Man responds:

Thanks!
I don't think there's such a thing as "too weird", though.
That'd be too good to be real.